well u definatly have a favorate topic! most of it sounds pretty good, keep at it.

I like this one in particular...probably because I can relate to all you write in it at the moment.

Well done.

very Sweet poem...

i could sense the feelings of it...

i love it.. :-)

It's kind-of confusing...but I understand it...that doesn't makes sense. Oh well. lol. As usual, good poem.

I loved how this piece started. It was very strong. I liked the variations on similar questions and phrases. The flow in the beginning was very strong. It was very nice. This is some very good work. I really think your biggest flaw at this point is missing spelling errors. Great job! Thanks for all the lovely reviews by the way! I really appreciated your kind words!