Well, SINCE I have the interweb now, finally, I wish to tell you that I really like this poem. I'm terribly sorry it's been so long. I'm going to begin updating my stories again. I like the poem, it's very different, almost haunting. I think there are a few places that need minor tweaking, but other then that it's wonderful!

-DarkNight77-

Cool poem. Mesa really likes it. Sad... kinda, but well-versed and well-written.