Reviews for bet the life
Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 11/13/2007
Great poem.

Twilight Starr
Seth Triskellion chapter 1 . 5/23/2005
wow. Nice job, and very positive outlook. I like it. well done
Relayer chapter 1 . 5/22/2005
Wow... I love the way you describe this. The two sides, "a day I smile / another day i'm losing myself" - how I wish I could have put that into words.

The references to dreams are good, and the use of italics is also an interesting feature.