Reviews for Silent Improvement
Mirabella chapter 1 . 1/5/2010
Beautiful language. :)

I love the imagery and the peace and questioning in it. :)
Moon-Chaser chapter 1 . 7/19/2005
Beautifully written, you have a way with words. This seems to emcompass so much.

Thank you for your review, you are right I do love them.

Keep it up.
AlwaysAmberella chapter 1 . 7/16/2005
Wow, you truly have a way with words, I love it, this poem completely just amazes me. I love the entirety of the whole thing, the questions the imagery, simply put...magical. Well Done.

Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 5/25/2005
Life burps, brings cacophany to silence. Interesting koan. m.
hellokttychic31 chapter 1 . 5/22/2005
luv this, ( really enjoy reading zen too, this caught my interest, nice question at the end...D

thanx for reviewing me too,muchLUB-kerr
THROUGHTHESEEYES chapter 1 . 5/22/2005
Loved this.I'm a christian, but I think some of the ideas are a little similar... it is the crane who saves the lotus - our spiritual nature allows us communion with God, while our intellect does not.
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 5/22/2005
very powerful and really well done. lovely word choice and a very spiritual read. love, love the poem. X3

!~* noelle *~!