Reviews for Your Kiss
sloppy firsts chapter 1 . 12/19/2005
so warm and tender :)
Herminia chapter 1 . 12/19/2005
Great poem.
kit feral chapter 1 . 7/17/2005
Aw! Very nice! I loved "is like being able to breathe underwater". I've never heard a kiss described like that before. Very cute, I adored it. Great work, keep it up! .
Sagaciouspnay chapter 1 . 6/30/2005
This is sweet and oh so beautiful! I love it! Keep on writing :)
arcane devices chapter 1 . 6/22/2005
enjoyably read, vivid descriptions and good series of metaphors. -ADD
Mar chapter 1 . 6/11/2005
Your taste of wordsUndeniably...Is what you are...But hmm...I now wonder...It is sudden...But my questions are not for you to answer...I'll wonder on

. I'll say... Wonderful! Keep it up! & don't worry, somehow I'll keep my words or die trying :p
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 6/8/2005
aw... thats so sweet i loves it, yet, i have yet to experience it lol going to fav this is
Cloud Burst chapter 1 . 6/4/2005
eloquent. it flows very well and just beautiful! )
Moonjava chapter 1 . 6/3/2005
Wonderful, I just love it.
catseyeview chapter 1 . 5/31/2005
beautifully captured...
Saeger chapter 1 . 5/28/2005
::bows head:: Beautiful. And true.
wishingdreamingwaiting chapter 1 . 5/28/2005
YAY! haha, great work! _
THROUGHTHESEEYES chapter 1 . 5/28/2005
every line is so beautiful!
Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 5/26/2005
A breeze so gentle,—

Sweetest dew upon red lips,—

Moon's soft touch on grass.

—Two little starlings,

Flit about those of yours,—

When you choose to kiss.

—Slighty parted mouth,

Softly exhaling Thy breath,—

Rose perfume on lips.

—Ripe papaya kiss,

Orange summer's melody,—

Ecstacy and bliss.

—Butterflies flutter,

Glowing strange delights loiter,—

Fantasies of touch.

—Iridescent pink,

Filling all that's just been green,—

Blooming into red.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 5/25/2005
the ending kinda sums it all up very sweet and nice similies too
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