Reviews for These Wounds
Emuhlee chapter 1 . 5/16/2006
wow, this is really good!
Rozlin chapter 1 . 6/23/2005
hm.. very good. more kisses for you!-kisses you lots-
HauntedMisery chapter 1 . 5/30/2005
I love your work, you are going on my favorite authors list for sure!
angel-of-woe chapter 1 . 5/26/2005
omg this was amazing! i loved it!
Moon-Chaser chapter 1 . 5/26/2005
This is beautifully written and so very sad, I have felt like this before. It is really very well done.

Keep it up.
Lady DreamWriter chapter 1 . 5/23/2005
wow.. again another shocker. Know that you are not alone. I'm here if you ever need to talk.
putz-6 chapter 1 . 5/23/2005
Awsome poem good job _
Hiedler chapter 1 . 5/23/2005
very good usual. i loved the lines: My sky turned from the brightest blue,To the darkest black.' it described a lot with only a few words, which is awesoem. excellent work
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 5/23/2005
beautiful and powerful. - keep up the great work!

!~* noelle *~!
Anthony chapter 1 . 5/23/2005
Wow, its like an artucualted truck load of emotions! Really powerful and really hit the spot, well done
apromptedpoet chapter 1 . 5/23/2005
Very nice. So much emotion and I'm sure a ton of people can relate to it as well as you.

It sounds a lot like Evanescense.

Good job.

Much Love-Suicidal_Greeting
Rosanna28 chapter 1 . 5/23/2005
This is so sad...You already know how I feel about the situation you're in, but I still wanted to tell you that I'm so sorry you're going through this, you really don't deserve it...There are two lines which I think are so good - My sky turned from the brightest blue,To the darkest black...They were so beautiful those lines! And so are you! So don't listen to anyone who gives you the feeling that you're not ok? I'm sending you my love. -x- Rosanna.
Spare Change chapter 1 . 5/23/2005
I like it, the feeling of loss in the poem, but I think it would be better if you organized your thoughts a bit more. :)