Reviews for broken violin
Erlkoenigin chapter 1 . 11/20/2008
I look at a photo on the table

a boy huggin' a shy girl

your image fades

I just stay alone.

Ist ein wunderbarer Schluß. Das könnte fast ein eigenes Gedicht sein.
Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 11/13/2007
Beautiful song.

Twilight Starr
Seth Triskellion chapter 1 . 5/23/2005
I loved this, it was amazing. great job, this is a favourite, definately
citrus scented chapter 1 . 5/23/2005
extremly heart breaking. love the disjointed thoughts that almost trail off to start another, they add to the effect of someone upset contemplating a relationship. great stuff, love the opening lines- they really caught me into the poem.