Reviews for Storm Surge |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I'm kinda confused... who's Seth? Otherwise it still rocks. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cool idea! I can't wait to read more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooh, cliffie... Oddly enough, my story 'Unmarked Boundaries' also has a character named Finn [appearing in Chapter 7]! Hehe... what a coincidence. Anyway, I look forward to the coming chapters. D |
![]() ![]() ![]() It does start out like a young adult story... lol. Anyway, I'm moving on to the second chapter. ) I figure there'll be more excitement there. ;D |
![]() ![]() ![]() im kinda confuzed do the parents want her to use her poweres? or dont they. are they part of the magic people that called her? this is good. keep writing. and if you can try to write some more in target:hunted |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is good. i like this story. can she control the weather or something? and i wonder who the people were that were looking at her |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonder what the evil guy want's her for . . . . . keep writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh... i LIKE this! plz continue! ~KS |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was so cool! please update soon! |