Cool,this is a really old story.

That was awesome! It was interesting, up till the end, where I was totally confused. You used only one sentence to show that Zeus and Ares were fighting. You got the element of surprise like you wanted, but it was just too quick for me to put a finger on it and grasp the whole idea. Cool! Are you going to have another chapter?

Very nice. However, you could add a few more details around a few spots. Otherwise, it was great.

I like this story. It's very good.

Not bad Jeff, although it feels as though your being rushed through the story.

Spend time with it and add details about the people and places.

Interesting look at the reason behind the fall of the Greek Gods as deities. Written quite well; however, it lacks a clear explanation of Ares' later actions in assaulting Zeus.

Good story. Original. Neat. Nice...write more of it. Need more.