Reviews for The War of Time I: The Beginning
The Red Raven chapter 1 . 10/19/2011
Cool,this is a really old story.
raingurlsofia chapter 1 . 12/29/2004
That was awesome! It was interesting, up till the end, where I was totally confused. You used only one sentence to show that Zeus and Ares were fighting. You got the element of surprise like you wanted, but it was just too quick for me to put a finger on it and grasp the whole idea. Cool! Are you going to have another chapter?
faery tragedy chapter 1 . 1/18/2002
Very nice. However, you could add a few more details around a few spots. Otherwise, it was great.
DragonLass chapter 1 . 9/16/2001
I like this story. It's very good.
TheBlueImp chapter 1 . 5/11/2000
Not bad Jeff, although it feels as though your being rushed through the story.

Spend time with it and add details about the people and places.
Lord Marcus chapter 1 . 4/28/2000
Interesting look at the reason behind the fall of the Greek Gods as deities. Written quite well; however, it lacks a clear explanation of Ares' later actions in assaulting Zeus.
Adam Jammoe chapter 1 . 4/25/2000
Good story. Original. Neat. Nice...write more of it. Need more.