Reviews for temptation at the nunnery
GypsyMothra chapter 1 . 6/22/2005
Nice structure. The ending works well.
Dee Dub chapter 1 . 6/18/2005
That's great. I applaud you.
i was a postcard chapter 1 . 5/27/2005
holy hell. oxymoron there, but the right thing to say for this i think. i, i don't know what to say even. and i love your format so much. i should get back to writing like this...i've been sticking to normal format too much...i love the visual art of it. wonderful.
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 5/25/2005
O do more of these! Rich and sensual topic so splendidly formatted! I love the innuendos here, for the unsuspecting so subtle, and that "!confession" is delightful.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 5/25/2005
im also so insanely jealous of the formats you come up with .. awesome poem.. especially that ending
myno chapter 1 . 5/24/2005
i love the format- how did you get fp to handle it without sticking dots in all over?
twenty-second seduction chapter 1 . 5/23/2005
i love this one. it's the best you've broken up and shaken .
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 5/23/2005
beautiful, beautiful. the line: " kiss the confession /& bite th / on your tongue " that is an amazing line, beautifully captured and really amazing. very unique and creative. well done!

!* noelle *!
bloodeath chapter 1 . 5/23/2005
nice