Reviews for Endings
Immortal Nyght chapter 1 . 2/2/2006
I love the format on this. It has a very powerful affect created of short little bursts of emotion, rather than drawing out a long rope of it as some of your previous poems have done. The poem also makes my surrounds Fade "Into nothingness"Immortal Nyght
Teesey chapter 1 . 5/24/2005
Has a definite rhythmn to it, which I like-it's almost like it should be a song-although I think it might be a little bit too stunted... But then how would you change it, really? I think I like it. Is this from what I think it is, Lee?
beti213 chapter 1 . 5/23/2005
"You smile-leaving." I don't know what it is, but that line completely grabbed me-simple and emotion-ridden at the same time; love it. although this might seem a little too structured at times, it holds together... well written.
Silence the Storm chapter 1 . 5/23/2005
Wow. That was amazing. The rhythm, the flow was simply brilliant. The words you chose to use for this poem were excellent. Such amazing work!