This is such a great poem.. well i love poems. I hope u right more

this sucks ass.

That was the most retarded poem I have ever read. Trite, unimaginative, and stupid. Please keep this between your girlfriend and you, seeing how females like stupid crap like that. Don't bother us with this and get on to your real work. Update "Back to School" ASAP, my ass. Do something useful.

Would you say it's a good thing that your poems brought tears to my eyes? Well, I believe it is.

May Fate smile upon you two once more.

Love,Lulu

Very sweet...my only suggestion is to either turn this poem into free-verse or change some rhymes. The current rhymes make it seem a little forced, which you certainly don't want in a love poem. By the way, to fix format, after you've finished uploading it, theres a link where you can preview it.

Wow! A love poem that I could bear. Not only that, I enjoyed it. You use some wonderful descriptions.