Reviews for Red river fantasy
HauntedMisery chapter 1 . 6/1/2005
This is good, good job!
Morbid Maxwell chapter 1 . 5/25/2005
XD WooHoot! Jesse is getting kinky now a days! XD Great job Love. Sorry, wasn't here yesterday so I'm a little behind on my r/r but I loved this (of course)!

Morbid Maxwell- He's the black widow, oh!
Galadh Niniel chapter 1 . 5/25/2005
Powerful imagery, I especially value the one at the beginning. I like the fact that you do not write about cutting directly but describe it in such inventive images, this makes your poem stand out from the many others on this subject that are found on this site.
AllyCred chapter 1 . 5/24/2005
very well written...i really like this...well done...its amazing. lots of love AllyCred