Reviews for Clipped
Bittersweetwriting chapter 1 . 5/26/2005
excellent work, one of my fav. poems:)
Morbid Maxwell chapter 1 . 5/25/2005
...makes me think of two charas. yet I'm not sure which two...but again, I loved! I hope to be on soon to r/r so, if I'm late, sorry!

Morbid Maxwell- He's the black widow, oh!
account not in use chapter 1 . 5/24/2005
Beautiful, dreamy imagery!
AllyCred chapter 1 . 5/24/2005
i really like this well done...its amazing...very vivid and beautifully described...i love it. lots of love ~AllyCred~
TheLastKiss chapter 1 . 5/23/2005
I really liked it. I don't really understand the line "And hope my warmth." I really liked the rhyming in the last three lines. Nice job.

Best Wishes,Brittney
TheCrystalShip chapter 1 . 5/23/2005
I really liked the imagery, especially lines like "the moon your protector". Great closing line too. Very sad poem, but something everyone can relate to, at least in some way.

Whisper on the Lips chapter 1 . 5/23/2005


Write on, this is great.