Reviews for Fay
ittybittytreefrog chapter 1 . 5/21/2006
That's great! I liked the effect of the changes in location of the stanzas. Great ending.
topaz07 chapter 1 . 4/21/2006
Ah, another wonderful piece. I love your world The Fay are wonderful people and deserve this. Many Blessings.
xxLuvoxx chapter 1 . 6/8/2005
Beautiful poem and the design is pretty nice! :)
swaggering curses chapter 1 . 5/29/2005
This is gorgeous! I'm a rabid tree-hugger so I'm totally agreeing with you. I especially like the stanza about "And what do human eyes behold..." Lovely imagery and I like the rhyming. )
Lisa Parry chapter 1 . 5/26/2005
I enjoyed this a lot, shame about the sad ending but the build up towards captured their good spirit in a mood of lightness. The alternating verse strucutres brought the message more cleaarly to the forefront. The beauty of nature was captured brilliantly :)