Reviews for Be strong
Cloud Burst chapter 1 . 6/30/2005
very uplifting )
Pillow Biter chapter 1 . 6/14/2005
This was a great piece, and I certainly needed it. Keep up the great work!
astral boy chapter 1 . 6/12/2005
yo! Thanks for all those reviews! This is a nice little song, have you put music to it at all? you should try if you haven't. there were a few spelling errors, personally i find them annoying but not everyone's as obsessively articulate as me, lol. :) Keep writing! I like the happy feelings you're starting to portray, it's a nice change.
Kenishiro chapter 1 . 6/7/2005
Very strong message, very truthful, well, the thing is everyone has their ups and downs. I like it, a very good motivational song/poetry here, keep up the good work and also thanx for ya support. I really get that a lot, but it will all comes down to me, right? So wish me luck!
q is for quirks chapter 1 . 6/1/2005
OMFreakingGosh that was one of the best songs I've read in a long time. It made me feel a lot better, and you almost made me cry it was that good...That certainly is an uplifter.
Written In Stone chapter 1 . 5/26/2005
wowsers i can relate to this. awesome song. i really like it.
marshbar960 chapter 1 . 5/25/2005
very uplifting and touching indeed. even though life is decorated with trials and tribulations, God has promised all of us a happy ending. thanks for sharing and keep writing!

p.s. God loves you and so do I!
WarriorHeart chapter 1 . 5/25/2005
nice work. I liked the rhymes you used.
pandaluv11 chapter 1 . 5/24/2005
I liked it. :P I'm sure it would sound really good with music!