i love thisJuan is HOT. i had to say that. okay (ahem) i couldn't find any typos. honest. but i wasn't really looking because i don't have time to do that. for now. haha. so update soon. and i'll definitely be looking forward to THAT.

Awesome story! You have amazing talent and I admire your writing skills. The plot seems to be well constructed, your characterization intricately designed, and you have a real way with words. Great job and I await your next installment!

You're one of the few writers that can write a good romance story w/o making a reader want to throw up. I adore every chapter. Well, I hope you update soon.

xD Aw, Lynn and Juan are so sweet. I'm pretty confused as to why this gorgeous gem of a fic didn't merit as much as it deseserved.

I really love your descriptive style of writing. And the way that her parents met Juan was plausible and real enough. Yes, we do have a gossipy old bat in our neighbourhood too, sadly.

So erm, I don't want to analyse every event since I'm sure it will bore you, I just want to say, this is a truly(oh god, i hate that word xD) wonderful ficcy.

Continue soon?

Ah. They're finally officially together! They're so cute. I wonder what is going to happen next. I mean, she needs to get to know him better and more, but does that mean more drama? I hope a girl doesn't come and try to seduce him away. I don't think he'll get seduced away anyways. He likes her a lot - I think.

this is such a cute story. i love it...

please write more soon

kellie

I luv the story! update and i'll keep reviewing...(haha)

OMG! The story is GREAT!

sorry i took so long 2 review. ive bin banned from the pc *sigh* im only allowed on weekends cuz othawise i dunt get any work done. i got lucky today so i got 2 read this. anyways aww bless im so touched my review actually made u wanna write more hehe tht makes me feel important :p anyways juan is such a sweetie i was just cooing throughout tht whole chapter. the romance is very realistic and in my opinion its not cheesy either its really cute and sweet. Mrs Yanes is so not nice *sigh* gossips so annoying but then again evry1 gossips once in a while. juan was a hit with the parents. im not surprised. its very rare to get a goodlooking guy whos not a prick. alynn is really insecure which i like since it makes it more realistic. shes a bit selfconscious (im not sure thts the right word) in her relationship or thts wat i think anyways. anywho UPDATE SOON!

I have to say I love your story I mean yeah it is like those high school love stories but its so well written. You seem to paint pictures with you words and it just so realistic I love it. And Alynn she seems like a real person the way she thinks and acts. Well I dunno i think I reviewed this story before but I'm not sure! (damn my short term memory loss) To get to the point I think you have amazing talent and hope you update soon

I started reading this and I of course fell in love ;)Ican't wait for another chapter...**wilting-tears**

i love it i luv it i luv it! i want juan! mine!

gawsh...this story is great. It really is. I've spent the last couple days reading it, and I absolutely love it. I can't wait for more. I hope you don't mind if I've added it to my favorite stories list!

Well I'm definitely an addict now. I need a twelve step program. You have got to update soon. Can't wait!Q

aww aw..need i say more?