Reviews for I'll call you freak, you'll call me delusional |
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![]() ![]() ![]() FINALLY! They are like SUPER together. YAYA! *does victory dancee* |
![]() ![]() Wi! I'm so glad her friends accepted him. _ And they're so cool together! Although their looks are so different, but they are a great couple! D Nice moments in this chapter. Like when Alynn and Juan encountered Ross. Awesome! And I still think you should write a book. *Pokes* |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol, love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cute. I like Ross. Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Heh. That's a nice addition to the story so far. I like the opening - and the ending, and everything else for that matter. It was an endearing piece, and it tied together the last chapter very well. I'm impressed. (and I can't wait for the next one, so hurry up.) So, yeah, ta ta! Aysel |
![]() ![]() this is great. lol. I adore ross. lol. well write mroe soon~Mel |
![]() ![]() *Pokes* Hey.. Guess I'm one of the few guys who actually read through the whole story. o_O Anyway I liked it a lot! Thank you for letting me read it, Alynn should be more open to Juan I think. o_o; But that's up to you. _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cute story. I like your characters. Update soon ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow I love this story it is so awesome. Normally I only read love/hate stories but this was really really good. I love the characters and how believable they are. I also like that while you have all the cliques, you don't make the people stereotypical or mean, you're fair to all the characters and that is great! Anyway I just love Lynn and Juan together they are so cute, it makes me think of something I would want in a relationship _ This is an awesome story and I hope that you will update soon _ bye bye and GREAT JOB! _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ga! You can't just leave it there! They have to resolve it! Aargh! Misa go crazy! O_o :D Anyway. great chapter, hehe, she's jealous... totally know how she feels, though. :S Oh, well. Please write more soon! :) |
![]() ![]() I love the whole thing so far _ I know you know that, but I thought I'd review it anyway o.O; |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good two chapters and I rerally enjoyed Ross and Kai. It was good to see that Juan knows other people besides Alynn. Poor Eva, having to be the innocent object of Alynn's jealousy. At least she turned out to be an incentive for them to have a sort of talk. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Gotta love Lynn and her little ways with words. P "I, um, like you." |
![]() ![]() ![]() It sounds so stereotypical, but I decided to give it a chance, and read the first bit anyway, and now I get to sound cliché because, well, I'm glad I decided to read it. Yes, it's very, very cliché, but no, I don't care at all. Your writing style compliments the story greatly, and makes it a pleasurable read, to say the least. It doesn't matter if it's cliché if you do it well, and you definitely do it well! I'll confess that I have a character-crush on Juan. Which helps me read it. -grins- Actually, I don't know what it is about your story, but something draws me in, and that's awesome. I'll leave it at that. Oh, and have fun in Turkey, of course! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was very cute. I usually don't read romance stories, but I was feeling adventurous and stumbled upon your story. I think I read it straight through and read the last chapter again. (Your character isn't the only one with attention-span issues). Juan is a very well rounded character, he's a very nice boy. That sounds odd to say, no, doesn't it? Well, Hazard, keep it up. I expect more gooey romance when I'm in a weird, delusional (haha) mood. Ta, ta! |