Reviews for I'll call you freak, you'll call me delusional |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Very nice chapter. I really like it. :) I like Ross and Kai. :) But when is Alynn going to tell her friends? They'll be hurt if they have to hear it through rumours...Aww, Alynn and Juan are so cute! :DAnd Del and Danny... I'm so happy for Del. :) And Braveheart is a great movie. (even if it took me months to see it, just because I thought we could actually see the executioners pulling out Mel Gibson's entrails, when we only saw it behind a screen. Sheesh. :D)Anyway. Please write more soon, can't wait to read more! :) |
![]() ![]() Hey! Me like this story vewy much! I'ts very cute, and very funny. Your characters are very vivid, and a lot of your descriptions and turns of phrase are hilarious. They crack me up. You've portrayed highschool very realistically, and you've portrayed the developing relationships very realistically too. There's a lot of nice chemistry between your two main characters. Though personally, I'd prefer Del's guy Danny. What can I say? I've got a thing for short, preppy nerds, especially if they're tallented. So that makes Danny really cute in my books. But I'm also really looking forward to watching the relationship between your two main characters develope and, I hope, to watching them get together. So keep up the good work, and please do update again soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() *grins* "Just mumbling and turning generally insane." I like that. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love your story! They're so cute together! I only hope that Alynn tells her friends soon, so it's doesn't become a big problem! Great job! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() AW! I LUV THE CHAPPIE! It could be so fluffy w/o kisses. Yahoo! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Kai and Ross remind me of my friends! We do crazy stuff like them all the time! Great chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another nice chapter. Cute...maybe the right word is slightly "fluffy"? lol. I have no clue. However, I still enjoyed it.-Rae |
![]() ![]() ![]() I generally dont review a story twice, the stories I like are on my author alert so I don't worry about missing a chapter. Call me mean, but truth be told I'm just a tad bit lazy :P. But I made an expection here, You're story is awesome. It's becoming my favorite so far from the ones I'm currently following. Juan is the perfect guy, except for his name, lol. I dispise the name juan for cultural reasons. Over here in the dominican republic, half of the population's name is Juan Perez. lol. Anyways, my favorite poem happens to be dream within a dream. I know it by memory, so just imagine my reaction when I say it within my favorite story. Awesome. Keep up the good work! Terror. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oops, sorry, I didn't mean to be picky I was just a bit confused by Alynn's actions, I like Juan and and I'm now feeling even more protective of him reading this chapter!. I'm glad their relationship/friendship is becoming more in depth and he told her a bit about his mum. Anyway, her actions in this chapter were hilarious, I still can't believe she climbed in his window! I love humour you put into even the serious scenes. |
![]() ![]() ![]() And how will school be next day? Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is really funny. I like your wording, and how it keeps me wanting more. Write more soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Glad you only have one more test to go! Hope the others went well. Well anyways, down to the point of this review. Nice chapter, interesting and detailed. I'm looking forward to reading more.-Rae |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is really good, but I think its Disnyworld that's in flordia, not land. Keep writing |
![]() ![]() Hello, darling! School just ended and I was having a tear-fest when my mom said to get on the comp. (She knew it'd make me feel better) and so I wanted to say thank you for the quick update, great chappie, and helping to stop my tears. *Blows kiss* Lots of Love, ~Cher |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah! Please, please, please just get them together! You're killing me!And you're doing really well with the updating. Sadly, I cannot say the same about me. I'm rubbish at , keep writing, oh and glad you like the name. :)Bleeding Iris x |