Reviews for I'll call you freak, you'll call me delusional
Ambryi chapter 18 . 8/26/2009
I really love this story. Its so sweet and sad! Juan and Alynn make a great pair.

Hoping you update soon :-)
Fat Passion Fish Poet chapter 2 . 8/10/2009
*More happy sighs*

Really loved the bit about the boy being a 'high school legand' and her being excited about him talking to her. It reminds me of this stunning geeky guy in one of my classes...I grin for the whole day after he talks to me, and my friends all laugh...


The talking to Mr Dorr at the beginning was also very amusing, as was the part beforehand, vis a vis, not taking French.

Really loved this little bit:

'I wish I was...

Oh great. Why couldn’t it be something like ‘what I want for my birthday...’?'


Also, the ice-cream analagy was really interesting, and I love the way you break up the serious-ness (does that work? O_o) with little things like Chrissy/Joshua/Marlene...since they're really rather funny...

Okay, I'm going to admit here that I was an absolute goth when I was younger, so the description of that dress? Ah, so gorgeous!

Umm...funny ending to the chapter as well...and, that's about all I have to say here...loved it!

Fat Passion Fish Poet chapter 1 . 8/10/2009
Absolutely love this so far - though I must admit that the summary already had me hooked before I began reading... *happy sigh*

So far I already love the main character, and I have a bit of a thing about the whole 'labeling' buisness, since I hate stereotypes, but I always find them rather interesting...the way you're dealing with them here is really rather entertaining. I loved the first description of the 'punk-loner,' and the part about him coming in wearing a hawaiian shirt was really funny.

Anyway, there's just a lot of really good stuff in this first chapter - definately enough to get me hooked! Your writing style is really fantastic, and the lack of mistakes here is awesome, and something that always makes me grin...

Umm, I'm kind of exhausted, so I'll review properly later...

Jodzter chapter 18 . 7/27/2009
Yay you updated! Aww he's moving away :( Loved this chapter!

King Patch chapter 18 . 7/25/2009
aw I missed you! I was worried you'd left your story behind for better things ;_;

But this new chapter is really magnificent. And, heartbreaking. I love how you've really written out all the struggle in Alynn's mind as to staying together long-distance or splitting up... I suppose you have a lot of first-hand experience to write about now, and I'm sorry to hear you were separated from the person you fell in love with...

I have to be honest and say I support the chick-flick happy ending and really hope your story will have a very happy ending in the chick-flick sense. But having said that, I feel like this is much more than a chick-flick story. I hope you don't feel like a happy end will make it seem shallow or anything...

anyhoo, update update update!
VampireAcademyDB chapter 10 . 7/24/2009
AWESOME story so far.. soo intriguing.. plz plz plz UPDATE SOON!
VampireAcademyDB chapter 18 . 7/24/2009
aw :'( Update soon please... btw reading your story and listening to Your Guardian Angel by Red Jumpsuit Apparatus is just sad :(
Jodzter chapter 17 . 3/25/2009
Aww poor Juan :-( Please update! I love this story!

whatcouldpossiblygowrong chapter 17 . 3/18/2009

no! (sorry, dramatic rampage over)

i just read the whole thing...dont stop!

and dont wait a year to update...should probably have checked when you last wrote a chapter b4 making that comment but oh wellies...

tis good!

love Juan :P

(oh wait, that comment was suposed to be an "i love juan" comment not the type of "love juan" you'd find at the end of a case it sounded that way...)
hydora chapter 17 . 2/7/2009
you are a cruel author

Juan is going to go away TT
hydora chapter 6 . 2/6/2009
realized that i've been reading for the last load of chapters and haven't said how great i think this is!

esp how Lynn actually develops and i enjoy the interludes where she interacts with her friends so the plot isn't centred on just her. chapter 17 . 11/10/2008
eh, redundant as it sounds, I just read you story.

I must confessed I rather enjoyed every chapter, and the characters are easily lovable, even while unbelievably confusing.

I'm not quite sure what to think about the whole thing, the story, and Juan - their relationship is seriously messed up.

Either way, I really loved this story, and I hope you don't mind if I hop in for the ride.

kreebby chapter 17 . 9/2/2008
I love this story a ton, please keep writing it ):

You didn't say you wouldn't, however it's been almost a month since the last update. I love it. I love the characters, I love the plot line. I really, truly, love it.
Duuude chapter 17 . 8/20/2008
Wow. Really good story. Not what I expected to happen though!

Juan's leaving! No! They must fight back!

Anyway, really love her character. Funny, clumsy, short attention span; reminds me of myself! lol

she might have adhd. those are all the symptoms. hahah.

cannot wait for the next chapter. the father makes me wanna burn things myself. xD I don't see how they can deal with him. A crazy mother and controlling father. life is hard for those two, juan and his sister, I mean.

Oh yeah and something else important happened this chapter! She said she loved him but received no reply. Buurn. lol

His mind WAS occupied though.

Anyway, can't wait for the next. )
l'heautontimoroumenos chapter 17 . 8/15/2008
He is not going to move because I don't want him to. You can write anything you want in the next chapter, like how purple dogs invaded earth, but he shall not move.


anyway, another really nice chapter. I like Evelyn.
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