ok so i started reading this today

and i gotta say that i love it!

you write really well and i can't wait till your next update!

I love this story.

I love the characters.

I love the plot.

Everything.

But, no

you can't split them up!

That'd be so tragic!

Wow! I'm so glad you've posted a new chapter! And it goes on and on and you're still writing so incredibly great! Write on please, waiting on the next chapter!

aww man you're making me sad. I can't wait to read more, see how it carries on.

I really hope you find the time and concentration to write and post, I know how real life comes first and sometimes you suddenly think, oh right, I was writing that story, wasn't I? and it's on the bottom of your to-do list.

Anyway, I'm a big fan. Do your thing! Wah wah wah!

Ack!

He can't move!

Not when Alynn just told him she loves him!

:(

awesome story!

i love the you portray Alynn!

I like this story,

and its a different take on the normal highschool stories, more focused on the family life of juan than the actual higschool scenario of bitchy popular girls and attention demanding arrogant popular boys. Juan is likeable, my favorite character in this story. And even though Alyyn is rather annoying at times when she wants to always be the center of Juans buisness its understandable because she does seem to love him even though she hasnt said it.

Cant wait till you update!

This is a really great story. You write each character so convincingly and with depth. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Write on! I just love this! So pleasee I'm begging you to write on! Well, not literally on my knees or anything, but if that would make you write on, I definetely would ;-)

Wow! I don't think I've ever left a review for this story before (maybe in the early stages, but I can't be sure), but I just had to after finally catching up on this. I started reading this story when you first started it, but stopped after the first couple of chapters (for no other reason than my insanely hectic life), but it was still safely in my favorites, waiting to be read by me. Then my best friend mentioned going through my favorites and starting to read this story and how much she loved it, so naturally that was my cue to start reading this again too! And it's amazing!

Really, you brought the characters to life in such a realistic way that I can't even describe it. In the first couple of chapters they were rather flat, but with every passing moment you made them more interesting and by now they have turned into well-rounded characters that I've grown to love. The connection between Juan and Alynn seems extraordinary to me and I'm not going to lie to you: they give me butterflies! From the first kisses to that moment in the car in this chapter, everything just makes me all fuzzy inside. Yes, fuzzy. For lack of a better word. Don't hold it against me.

Also, the humor in this story is incredible. It's strange and unique and really cracks me up. Especially the conversations between Juan and Alynn. I like their banter and pointless, crazy talks and I love how they're growing closer over the last few chapters. How he's sharing things with her and all that. Which brings me to my next point: it takes a very talented writer to turn a story that started out kind of superficial (no offense, because the story has been awesome from the very first chapter) about the popular crowd and all that, into something more serious and something that has got more depth, the way you have. Really. There's more drama now and it's gotten a bit more serious, but you still capture the characters and if anything, these surprising twists in the recent chapters added more depth to both the story and the characters.

Oh wow, I just checked my watch and apparently it's 3.15 in the morning here in Holland. Thank God, I have the day off tomorrow! But it's been totally worth it. This story is without a doubt just as good as lot of the books about these kind of things I read. Really, you should get this published. I think I like this story even better than most of the books I read, because the characters you created are much more lovable and well-rounded.

So, I guess that only leaves me with one thing left to do: BEG! Please update soon! ;)

That'll be all for now! Thanks for writing (or being in the middle of writing) such an enjoyable and amazing stories. It's been a long time since a story, book or film or TV-show or whatever has made me feel this way. What way, you ask? You know, pining to find true love. Haha. If only I could find my own sweet, cute, unique Juan. Preferably without the many problems surrounding him, but...yeah. Juan is hot. Red and black hair included.

Hope to read more soon!

Steffanie

PS. I also love how you didn't make this story all about sex like it mostly is with High School stories. It hasn't even been mentioned. I don't know if you might in the future (since it's probably a subject that can't be ignored forever), but I'm glad you decided to wait a while before mentioning it. It's another thing that makes this story unique.

Okay, this really is all. I'm just going to stop now and submit this review or else I'm afraid I'll keep going until dawn and I'm determined to get SOME sleep tonight! ;)

Oh and lastly; this is probably the longest review I've ever submitted. Pretty impressive for 3.20 in the morning! Anyway, I'm sorry if none of this made sense. Again, it's 3.20 in the morning!

i really like this story, it's unique and VERY interesting.

i hope you continue writing, update soon!

I just love, love, love this story! I'm note done reading yet, but when I have more time on my hands, I'll start reading again! Write on!

This story is great and has a pretty unique plot, good job on the originality factor! Keep updating please

If he doesn't pronounce it 'hwan', how is it pronounced? I'm Hispanic, and J's that don't make H sounds are just odd to me. I'm liking where this story is going though, it has nice plot flow.

I like how you've placed the main character in the proverbial popular group; not many would write from that point of view. You've also made the main character very likeable and down-to-earth, which, as you pointed out in the end, people not in the popular group don't get to see. Nice work!