ohh man I totally failed to read the stuff I was supposed to read so I could do my sociological analysis la-di-la because I was reading your story instead!

I remember when (years ago) you suddenly stopped updating and how gracelessly I had to accept that... and how happy I am now that you seem to have decided to continue to fight the good fight! or perhaps the food fight!

It's been such a while since I read last time that I can't even recall if you've rewritten entire chapters or left them as they were, to continue into deeper depths in the latest ones. Either way it's brilliant, and I hope with all my awesome brain-muscles that you will continue to update as you do/have/ought/etc.

Way back when I graded this story as one of my very favorites on FP, and it still is. Awesomeawesomeawesome. I would marry you if it was normal to marry someone you don't know who writes really well.

:D

I like it, but i dont want alynn getting hurt!

and she will, cause i really like juan, and his sister, but his parents r kinda messed up( no offense, thats just how i see them)...

It waas such a wonderful surprise to find a new chapter. This chapter really struck me on a personal core - Juan's father sounded like a doppleganger of my own father - it was rather startling. Interesting family dynamics. I love Juan and Alynn's relationship, the unhurried quality of their progression, they're so sweet together. I can't wait to read the further outcome of their meeting with Juan's father and maybe uncover some of the mystery surrounding Juan's life.

YES! You updated! YAH! This was a great chapter, though it did seem a bit rushed. Still awesome, though. I'm curious about why the father is easier on Evelyn than Juan, though.

awe she loves him. :)

so his mom is dysfunctional and pretty desperate and dependent on Juan. how the hell do you pronounce that? Ju-an? since it's not like hwan.

update when possible. :D

is this the end?

Because no doubt its a good story that in my opinion definetly should not end like this...

How complicated! I was completely infatuated with Juan's character but now I'm a little hesitant. Teenage boys, sigh. Anyways, thanks for posting!

You're going to need to update soon!

Or I'm going to be more distraught then Alynn right now cause nothings been answered!

I liked it! :D

I like your story, hope you'll update soon

woot woot.

Wow, this is seriously a great story.

Great story! I like how Alynn responds to her emotions, not wanting to cry in front of her boyfriend, or tell him she loves him. It's very real, not as cliche as lots of other stories out there. You probably won't, but I'm gonna say it anyway: Please update soon!

I'm really loving this story so far... i really hope everything turns out okay with them!

Hey, wow. I am absolutely loving this story, and I only read it on a whim! Please continue soon as I'm dying to find out what happens next!

i just read your story all in on go... it's awesome. i love it. i love Juan... he's literally my perfect ideal. and she's cool too. real, you know? the school is way more convincing than most high school stories as well- the people are all just a stereotype. i like that.

please please carry on with it!