I just read the whole thing in one sitting and I have to tell you you write beautifully. It makes me want to quote it word for word.

you have a real talent, please update soon :)

The most frustrating feeling in the world is being left out of the world of the individual one cares immensely for. Sometimes the only thing left to be done is simply be there, regardless.

I like the simplicity of the narrative, and the beauty of Juan. He's an interesting character, and I can almost see him moving quietly through halls, and anomaly at peace, not rushing in his little world; simply enjoying it.

I'm looking forward to the next turn of events, and pending character development. And I must admit, I do so with very little patience.

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~*~Cailin~*~

Great story. I hope you haven't given up on it 'cause I'd really like to read what happens next. :)

Pretty great story... Till your next update.

I was wondering when you're going to update?

Pretty good story. Everything looks like its going downhill from here though

omg that was so sad! PLEASE update soon!

Hey, I just recently discovered your story, and I have to say that it is really good ). Juan's really cool ) and I love how he's not "gorgeous" or "hot" or "cute", but just himself. it makes the story much less cliche ].

anyway, great job, and update soon!

~ Aria

So far, I've only made it to ch. 4 but this seems like an interesting story. I like Alynn's personality, she's real witty and funny. Juan seems like a cool character. I like the fact that you didn't label him as the typical punk, but just different. I'm looking forward to seeing where this story goes.

so, uhm

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i am gonna go elope with ross and cheat on him with your story, 'kay?

Aww, poor Alynn. This isn't the end, right? I need explainations! An happy ending!

Aww, everybody needs a good cry now and again. I hope everything works out for Juan and Lynn, and for Juan and his mother - that seriously can't be easy. Good writing, though! There's at least some cheerful news. ;p

I am amazed! I love this story, I read the whole thing today and I'm very excited for other chapters _ You're awesome and I just can't describe how wonderful your writing is, at least not in words. I will check back from time to time.

Best Regards,

DruidShadow

I love this story! The characters are relatable. I hope you don't leave this story unfinished!

Fab story so far. Can't wait for the update!