Reviews for Forgotten
less-than-imperfect chapter 1 . 6/17/2005
sometimes it's better to just not say anything.

my, aren't you a patient girl?
Elizabeth Bilberry chapter 1 . 6/2/2005
undeniably beautiful. i like how the lines all short - it's like the speaker tried but couldn say more.

EB
silverquill212 chapter 1 . 5/24/2005
I'm not sure I care much for the phrasing, though it does seem to fit with the short, choppy thoughts. Very strong and dramatic; good job of harnessing details of unjustified patience to reveal your emotions.