Reviews for Unrequited
Waterscribe chapter 1 . 7/11/2005
Hello Ariana! Long time no talk. This is a very, um, passionate poem. LOL. But it's good. ~Anjali
archived chapter 1 . 6/14/2005
Hey Ari! wow i really like this poem. It has a lot of powerful and meaningful lines. And it doesn't really follow a linear thought, it's more random thought. Cool stuff!-L-
cassie chapter 1 . 5/26/2005
like i said. this might just be ur best one yet. tres powerful. i like it a lot. yah... i definitely told you this aready but umm im reviewing anyways cause you made me. love ya! you're super talented.
Yay Area chapter 1 . 5/26/2005
I really liked this one... I might have to read it again to fully understand it. It's always interesting and fun to read your new poetry. ::mwah::
hit chapter 1 . 5/25/2005
Da'ling, i love it. beautiful. There are some parts at the beggining that are a little confusing but otherwise its ,Hit
Fallen Shadows chapter 1 . 5/24/2005
Whoa, can you SAY powerful? I like this, dude, it's good. Damn expressive, more expressive than anything I could EVER write.
euphonia chapter 1 . 5/24/2005
This is great, Ari! Love it! I think it's one of your best yet. I love the last line. You have such a gift for writing!