Reviews for In My Eyes
gold against the soul chapter 1 . 5/25/2005
This is nice. You've combined a sort of descriptive, abstract poem with something more matter-of-fact, which I like. Keep writing.
Waste of Space chapter 1 . 5/25/2005
I love the meaning of how things may be different in our eyes than in the eyes of another.
fake-smiles-n-masks chapter 1 . 5/25/2005
i think its good. the rhyming isn't too bad. great job! ) smilingface