Reviews for This Feeling
Lady DreamWriter chapter 1 . 5/31/2005
I felt the same way when my friend died of cancer (brain tumor) I put a poem up about it too. Never fear, you are not alone!
xxLuvoxx chapter 1 . 5/26/2005
I'm very sorry this happened but writing about the feelings you go through is great. Short and complete, this peice of writing is simply deep and meaningful
RootbeerFloat chapter 1 . 5/25/2005
Wonderfully written. I think we've all had those thoughts, even though we wont admit it. *bows and claps to DustyTiger*

Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 5/25/2005
Something I hope never to experience. Painful, to be sure. Just stay strong. This must be straining upon you emotionally, most of your poems reflect this inner pain. I understand you want to get your feelings out on paper, and perhaps you do not want to dwell on fixing it because it is a sensitive subject, but more imagery and poetic devices (alliteration, metaphor, etc) do aid in capturing that lost tone, that feeling of emptiness. Again, do not worry if it is too much. I can sense your pain. Keep writing, and I hope you feel better.