|Reviews for Away from Humanity|
| marshbar960 chapter 1 . 6/3/2005
this is relatable to me as well...one should all want to take this vacation...thanks for sharing and keep writing!
| Pillow Biter chapter 1 . 5/31/2005
extremely powerful, great message, and perfectly relatable to me. Great job!
| Clap Clap Raise Your Hands chapter 1 . 5/29/2005
so so true :) i guess maybe it's good that at least there are still some places like that around but the feeling in the poems screams that you're Escaping, which makes the poem sad really, i like the first verse too, i always admire people who can use nature in their poems really well, i have tried (Watercoloured Memories) but you use it very well :) x weasel within x
| smile persephone chapter 1 . 5/27/2005
This poses a lot of internal questions. I like the bold/underline technique. Nicely done.
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 5/26/2005
great poitn & very true.. nice bolding
| catseyeview chapter 1 . 5/25/2005
just beautiful...if it wasn't raining here, I'd do just that...I wander off to the beach to free my soul. I love this piece. one for my favs...