Oh! Cliffhanger! This was awesome! I can't wait for the next one! :O)

Why not call the story, 'The unknown Allies?"

This chapter was very interesting! It caught my attention quickly and held it... I can't wait to see what happens next! *By the way, when I saw your note at the top of the page I started crying because that was so sweet of you!

Wow! All I can say right now is wow! I loved the imagery, it's like there was a movie playing in my mind, but more real, sort of like a play. It seemed I could have reached out and touched the characters and things. Keep up the good work!