fisrt off, I want to say I love that name for a club, especially a gay club, it's too ironicly perfect for words thumbs up

second, OMG! I LOVE THIS STORY! and the chapters are so long, it's like an entire book in one chapter- lol. Tis good stuff.

Consitering all you put up there are very few gramatical errors or spelling errors, it's truly a piece of art. good job

Very good story. I love how they try, try again.