|Reviews for cosmic love|
| GypsyMothra chapter 1 . 6/22/2005
| thank you thoughtful chapter 1 . 6/2/2005
there go the aesthetics. damn, this is so so good.
| lackluster chapter 1 . 5/30/2005
this is absolutly beautifully written...i like how you space certain words. it's kind of like your 'signature' isn't it?(i noticed you do that in your other poems, too) that's what makes them special! :)
| Indigo-Andie chapter 1 . 5/30/2005
you take what almost seems unnatural/ deformed/ ugly and combine it with such beautiful words that it makes the reader wonder if they are looking at things the wrong way.
| addie pray chapter 1 . 5/30/2005
Saccharine sweet. Well done.
| AboveTheSalt chapter 1 . 5/29/2005
This is so beautiful as well! I don't want to be redundant with my reviews, but these are all SO GOOD. You are a fictionpress marvel. The idea behind this is so tender, so loving, so beautiful. I am in absolute love.
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 5/29/2005
| i was a postcard chapter 1 . 5/27/2005
i adore the second stanza. this is tantalizing, sensual, provocative...perfect romance that doesn't make me gag.
| poetic abortion chapter 1 . 5/26/2005
beautiful, beautiful. really just well done and splendid.
!* noelle *!
| elvenstorm chapter 1 . 5/26/2005
This is very surreal... can't think of a better way to describe it! It is beautiful though, love the whole feel of it. Keep writing.