Reviews for Shining In Your Eyes |
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![]() ![]() ![]() im so happy that you started writing again lol...its a very good story and i enjoy it so much so ya im happy, cant wait till the next chapter comes out |
![]() ![]() ![]() heya just started reading this today all day lol couldn't get enough(: but i noticed its been like over a year now since the update :( Please update soon i hate to see such an awesome story lead off like this right when everything amazing started happening. so update when ya can, your readers would greatly appreciate it :) -NEM |
![]() ![]() ![]() i like it alot, i really do think you should keep writing this story... good luck... ~smurf~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can't wait for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it! :) Hope for your next update! :D |
![]() ![]() OMGOMGOMG . D: I just stumbled to this site and this is the first fan fic I read here! OMFG I SO LOVE IT! x) Please update soon and congrats on your graduation~. |
![]() ![]() heya plz update soon! im loving the story so much and i reli wanna c how kai would react to knwing layra gettin rapped! they are such a cute pair! i wish they would have stayed longer then that! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow i loved it your really an astounding writer, can't wait for you to continue! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i think your story is great so far but i think your cpaters are short and need more details. thatll captures readers attention more. but nonetheless i like your story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah! Yes, that was definitely a good chapter! _ I can't wait till the next chapter! Ah, so you just graduated? Me too! I graduated high school about two weeks ago, haha, but I don't really have all that much more time to update my stories on ficitonpress and cause I'm working a whole bunch... but yeah, so, anyways congrats on graduating! And I'll be looking forward to updates on this story! Just thought I'd drop a review. XP |
![]() ![]() ![]() what the hell just happened...seriousely. |
![]() ![]() ![]() UPDATE! i love this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey, this is a great story, i hope there is more romance to come. No criticism, just please update soon :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() An interesting fic. You're developing her character slowly, and there are some aspects which need exploring more thoroughly, so update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOVE the story! update soon! i REALLy wanna find out what happens next. can't wait! |