Reviews for Shining In Your Eyes |
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![]() ![]() Please, Update, I'm dying to know what happens between Kai And Kyra. Sweet Story! I wish that I could write as good as u. lol, i suck at stories. :P XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() woot! Nextchapter!Nextchapter!Nextchapter! Sorry a bit hypper. I tend to get that way when im over tired. oh damn *falls asleep on compter table and starts to drool on keybored* |
![]() ![]() YAYY! |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey, if you've already read my other review w/e i just wanted to comment on the pics...or one pic in particular... i don't think that Kai's pic really suits him...he seems too, sad decrepit 40 year old in the pic.. in the book he sounds dark, hot mysterious, with a soft spot for a chick that he likes... i dun't know.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey, i luv yur story. I just finished reading the first seven chapters, and i think you really have some original ideas. The bet's pretty funny too, i know i would never agree to a bet with stakes so high...but that's pretty funny;) newas, keep up the good work hope you get over your writer's block, and update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() thats kooljust update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() awsome! i say stick with kai and tell allen to kiss her ass lol badass chick is so much better lol, but your story, your choice im just here to respect a fellow creative writter, love the story, buh bye |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow! i haven't read you're story in a while.. :S i forgot how good it was though! keep on writing and update as soon as possible :P you're story rox... and i'm really curious as to know what's up with the kai-kyra-allen triangle goin' on now :P keep up the good work and just so ya know i updated chapter three of until the end .~! enjoy! :P |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm really starting to like this story. It kinda reminds me of She's all that..but whatever. hey! you mentioned my name! "Yeah, you’re that freak girl frommy school. Uh… uh… K-Kyrsten, Kayla, Kyla-" Kayla! that's muh name! ok..it isn't spelled like that, (mines spelled Keyla) but whatever! haha, just wanted to mention that! LOL |
![]() ![]() You have to update, I need to know what happens next! Plz, update soon...T.T |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great Chapter!Update soon please! |
![]() ![]() UPDATE NOW! T.T Please! Short note: Awsome story, I'll be tuning in soon, and...keep up the good work? I know I know, I'm not good with compliments, OK? So that will have to do. lol :) Yuki |
![]() ![]() ![]() This looks...interesting. I think if i read more I'll see more into the storyline but I thought I'd drop a line and I say that I think you're writing technice (sorry i can't spell) is really nice. later! |
![]() ![]() please update? i love this fic |
![]() ![]() ![]() I find Allen's sister soo anoyinig. Someone should beat her ass! I think its soo sweet that Kai and Kayra kissed. I really really really think they should go together. I hope Allen loses. He isn't right for her, nope not at all. |