Reviews for Shining In Your Eyes |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome chapter! Kyra is falling in love...I think. Well, I think her and Kai make a great couple. To me, Allen seems more like a good friend, but you can do whatever. It is your story after all. Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter, wow, I didn't expect that to happen. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Its getting really good! You must update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i think this is really great story so far, exciting and everything, update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() uh huh.. totally radical.. ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() yupp.. i like it! ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey cool story, I really like it. And as to your question, I like Allen, I don't know why though. |
![]() ![]() I think Kyra should have kicked that bitches ass. You see Kayra acts all tough during school and stuff. But when this bitch is all in her face she dosn't do anything. I would have got up pushed her hard against the wall and slapped the fuck out of her. But thats just me. lol I do like the story plot line. I dont like that dude whats-his-name, who is trying to get to her. He seems way too much of a golden boy. I would be shocked if he gets to her. He never had any problems. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is really good! You must update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is great! I love it! Is Allen unconciously, slowly, bit by bit, falling for Kyra? This is so interesting! I can't wait until the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg! please keep writing . please? its really good! kyra's attitude is kinda like mine... anyway.. keep writing! |
![]() ![]() The only thing that keeps bothering me is that you are kind of stealing copyrighted dialogue. No?That's a hell no. Is from she's all that You're not as tough as you think you you're not as bad ass as you think you are. Is from 10 things I hate about you. The story's pretty good, but it bothers me to hear quotes being played off as your own when they aren't. |
![]() ![]() ![]() okay very wow kinda story...though sad that people are so mean to her. best of luck on allen though she is going to be a hard thing to crack. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is so great. i'm enjoying every minute of it! allen is really falling in love with Kyra right? |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG i just want to punch the belinda whore..gr..damn her...i think kyra should have leave the place...goddess.. |