Reviews for Cain and Abel
Don-Jam chapter 1 . 2/9/2009
Like it, It Good to think about what it was like for the family.

What would her mother and father think? What would they say?

I think something like this:

Adam: 'SEE what You have done Eve!'

Eve: 'YOU eat from the tree too!'

...

Tamar: 'She Gete you there'
Clodhopper chapter 1 . 6/30/2005
interesting viewpoint to go from. this story holds so much power, it always has: "Am i my brother's keeper?" hmph. btw, thank you so much for your review and CC. nothing better than helpful hints! now to give a few of my own - maybe you could add a few more descriptions in this? 5 senses kind of thing

~Mack
CorsairMach chapter 1 . 5/31/2005
Intriguing concept; I like it. Excellent form and flow. Keep it up!
ladieDAWN chapter 1 . 5/29/2005
Finally a biblical fiction! YAY! I absolutly luv it so far. Keep up the great work.

Lady Dawn
W3DNESDAY chapter 1 . 5/26/2005
interesting perspective. it would be awesome if you continued the story and explored life after abel's death.