Reviews for The Shufa Stain Our Hearts
WiredWords chapter 1 . 6/2/2005
this poem is somewhat lyrical. The way you worded things made me picture cathedrals with fallen snow on a overcast day. i have no idea why. 'Nuclear winters' was an especially nice description. kudos

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