Reviews for Angels Fall First
Alexander Core chapter 1 . 5/27/2005
Alkar chapter 1 . 5/27/2005
i liked the idea and generally the really nice...but u shud consider changin lines 7 n 8, change civilains,try to make it flow better, the throng run amok, dunno if thats gramatically right. and consider changin dust to smoke or flames...its ur poem so these are just like suggestions, and im no brillaint poet... so dont change it if u dont wanna