|Reviews for The Parker Chronicles: Melissa's Story|
| Tessa chapter 13 . 1/21
This is a great story but something is not right. The brothers are Jake, Brad, Tyler, Kevin, Chris and Topher?! That are 6 brothers, nog 5! Van someone explain that?
| reader998 chapter 27 . 8/30/2013
awesome story wow five brothers life would be awesome if one had five older brothers well congratulations on completing ur story was lovely :D
| Dominique Diane chapter 27 . 8/18/2013
AWESOME STORY! I loved the drama!
| dreambrother63 chapter 27 . 5/25/2013
I have read your story soooo many times because I love everything about it. But I STILL don't understand why the HELL Jason kissed that girl!? I can't get over it. omg. He made me so ridiculously angry.
Love your work!
| LaBru chapter 1 . 3/16/2013
I love this story. I understood the protectiveness of her brothers, since I only grew up with brothers myself (with mom included). I like the suspense you threw in there with emails from the secret admirer. I thought I figured it out at one point, but then you threw something in there to throw me off. All in all, I loved it.
| Jolouwill chapter 27 . 1/6/2013
I fell upon your story when I came onto fiction press to read one of Tijans and I have to say I really enjoyed the way the characters played out. I love the fact you didn't have the main character jumping into the relationship at the start and you took us on a journey with them. You are a talented writer and I look forward to now reading more of your work.
Thank you :)
| LiveLoveRead95 chapter 27 . 12/25/2012
Awesome work! loved it from start to finish. :3
| Caitlanc4 chapter 1 . 12/20/2012
Love story's with older brothers
| tanner chapter 10 . 11/2/2012
you spelt "soul" wrong
| Aeris.Lockheart507 chapter 14 . 10/31/2012
Did I cry when I read this chapter?... HELL YES :'(
| Keke chapter 27 . 7/23/2012
I enjoyed your story a lot! I've looked at it twice before but have never once finished it because I think I got bored during the middle a bit. (no offense) But this time through I really loved it! My favorite character is Melissa (of course) and Jake (Parker, duh!) and I also love Kevin, Chris, Brad, Ty, (ok ok, I love all the brothers!) They are so overprotective and sweet towards Melissa!
I think that Melissa and Jason are really cute together as well, but maybe you should have a epilogue of Melissa and Jason's wedding, or even Stephanie and Brad's wedding. I'm not sure, but I know for sure that I would have enjoyed an epilogue!
I love how every brother's personality is different and how they get in arguments, because in some stories they are so perfect that they don't even argue one little bit and that really annoys me. I'm glad that main idea of this story was Melissa and Jason's romance and maybe even Melissa's relationship with her brothers. But I'm also glad you added some touches to that like Nessa, Jake (the other Jake thats not a Parker) and some other interesting stuff.
Now for the constructive criticism, I think that maybe this plot is a bit overused. You know, the whole idea of brother's best friend shows up a lot it stories. But I really loved reading it no matter what!
There were a few spelling and grammar mistakes but it's okay and I think it's fine seeing as this is a pretty long story...
Congratulations on finishing the story!
| smile chapter 27 . 1/5/2012
so i just read this entie story in like a few hours and i loved it! you're an amazing writer. My only thing doh is that you finished the story really fast in the end too many things took place in the last 2 chapters or thats at least what i think
| shann-ng chapter 27 . 12/29/2011
Brilliant story, truly enjoyed reading it :) loved the connection with the siblings!x
| Non.graceful chapter 21 . 5/13/2011
| Non.graceful chapter 12 . 5/13/2011
The name I have used to review this chapter is my fiction press account.
I really like this, but in some places I hate how you use the same words tO describe different scenes annoys me a lot!
But still. I keep thinking is this actually real? But even if it is, I still like it.