Absolutely loved this story!

This is for Tessa
Chris and topher are the same people. His full name is Christopher. Chris, or topher for short.

This is a great story but something is not right. The brothers are Jake, Brad, Tyler, Kevin, Chris and Topher?! That are 6 brothers, nog 5! Van someone explain that?

awesome story wow five brothers life would be awesome if one had five older brothers well congratulations on completing ur story was lovely :D

AWESOME STORY! I loved the drama!

I have read your story soooo many times because I love everything about it. But I STILL don't understand why the HELL Jason kissed that girl!? I can't get over it. omg. He made me so ridiculously angry.

Love your work!

I love this story. I understood the protectiveness of her brothers, since I only grew up with brothers myself (with mom included). I like the suspense you threw in there with emails from the secret admirer. I thought I figured it out at one point, but then you threw something in there to throw me off. All in all, I loved it.

I fell upon your story when I came onto fiction press to read one of Tijans and I have to say I really enjoyed the way the characters played out. I love the fact you didn't have the main character jumping into the relationship at the start and you took us on a journey with them. You are a talented writer and I look forward to now reading more of your work.
Thank you :)

Awesome work! loved it from start to finish. :3

Love story's with older brothers

you spelt "soul" wrong

Did I cry when I read this chapter?... HELL YES :'(

Hey,

I enjoyed your story a lot! I've looked at it twice before but have never once finished it because I think I got bored during the middle a bit. (no offense) But this time through I really loved it! My favorite character is Melissa (of course) and Jake (Parker, duh!) and I also love Kevin, Chris, Brad, Ty, (ok ok, I love all the brothers!) They are so overprotective and sweet towards Melissa!

I think that Melissa and Jason are really cute together as well, but maybe you should have a epilogue of Melissa and Jason's wedding, or even Stephanie and Brad's wedding. I'm not sure, but I know for sure that I would have enjoyed an epilogue!

I love how every brother's personality is different and how they get in arguments, because in some stories they are so perfect that they don't even argue one little bit and that really annoys me. I'm glad that main idea of this story was Melissa and Jason's romance and maybe even Melissa's relationship with her brothers. But I'm also glad you added some touches to that like Nessa, Jake (the other Jake thats not a Parker) and some other interesting stuff.

Now for the constructive criticism, I think that maybe this plot is a bit overused. You know, the whole idea of brother's best friend shows up a lot it stories. But I really loved reading it no matter what!

There were a few spelling and grammar mistakes but it's okay and I think it's fine seeing as this is a pretty long story...

Congratulations on finishing the story!

Keke

so i just read this entie story in like a few hours and i loved it! you're an amazing writer. My only thing doh is that you finished the story really fast in the end too many things took place in the last 2 chapters or thats at least what i think

Brilliant story, truly enjoyed reading it :) loved the connection with the siblings!x