Reviews for The Parker Chronicles: Melissa's Story
Non.graceful chapter 21 . 5/13/2011
Non.graceful chapter 12 . 5/13/2011
The name I have used to review this chapter is my fiction press account.

I really like this, but in some places I hate how you use the same words tO describe different scenes annoys me a lot!

But still. I keep thinking is this actually real? But even if it is, I still like it.
Non.graceful chapter 1 . 5/13/2011
The name that I've used for this review is my fiction press account.

I like how you started off. It was simple and right frOm the start you had me interested and wanting more.

Although it was only a small chapter, it was good enough to start and introduce the plot.

Nic work
Raycheld84 chapter 27 . 1/27/2011
I just reread this while thing...i still love it :)
Plumey chapter 1 . 11/23/2010
I just came across this story today and read it all the way through. Keeping track of the boatloads of brothers was kind of difficult at first, but I kinda fell in love with all of them at the end. The whole thing was very male-centric, but fair enough. Well written. I wish Mitch and Sarah had been fleshed out a bit more. It was kind of uncanny reading about the Baker's Square on Ogden avenue. Too bad that place closed down, huh? (Yeah, I live near Chicago and went to high school in the rich suburbs where "everyone goes to country clubs and the kids shoot up heroin", to paraphrase :p). And I'm familiar with the best community college in the country, too; most kids from my high school ended up there. Brought back some memories; never thought I'd enjoy a work even more because it's set in a familiar setting.

Well, it's been four years or so since you finished this, but you should totally consider writing on this site again. :)
Candescence chapter 27 . 6/24/2010
Wonderful story. Good job on it. I just think that in the beginning, before we read about the past in her nightmares, that the story just kept dragging on. I was about to not finish it because all it was talking about was I hate Mitch, no you can't date my best. friend, and the term paper. Anyways, congrats on completing it, I'm really glad I stuck to reading it, and yup...
Candescence chapter 14 . 6/24/2010
Oh, this chapter was so sad; it made me cry. I feel so bad for them, and Chris just had to add to it by saying that crap about her...
AndItMovesUsAll chapter 27 . 6/2/2010
I really enjoyed this, it's a great story itself, and all thr chracters were strong. I loved the their family and how it was about that as well as the were quite a few typos and grammatical errors that i came across but thats only technicalities. :D Looking forward to reading the rest of the stories!
gulistala chapter 14 . 5/22/2010
Okay let me digest this- Chris values his friends more than his younger sister? No, 'If he touches you I'll have to break his neck'? Instead, she shouldn't be going near him? Wow. He's a downright asshole. He really needs a good slap and just for that I hope Jason is the secret admirer and that Melissa gets with him. That bastard. What kind of a brother is he?
Capucine chapter 22 . 1/8/2010
It was such a coincidence that I just had to comment that ruby soho came on my iPod while I was reading this chapter (seeing as the chapter is named for the song, in case you forgot [It's been a few years since this was finished])
midnight989 chapter 27 . 12/8/2009
Wonderful story! It seemed pretty realistic overall, not just another one of those cliched stories that even Disney wouldn't write :D Definitely one of my favorites, really hope you decide to do a sequel sometime, I'd love to see what happens with Melissa and Jason in their future.
deceitful.dreams chapter 27 . 10/17/2009
A. Watts chapter 27 . 8/12/2009
I really like this story, it's great.
WOOP chapter 7 . 8/8/2009
a decade under the infuence-TAKING BACK SUNDAY XD
Inescapable Nymph chapter 27 . 7/7/2009
Wow nice story its amazing
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