Ok, now this is a really good story and I like the plot. It was kind of funny because i heard a song which had the line "I come from a family of losers" and it kind of reminded me of this...in a good way. The one thing I don't get is who is Mitch? I mean I know he's her friend but you haven't really talked about him much or what's his background with the parkers, or just Melissa.

i really liked the story, i thought that it had its funny parts and i liked the last line of the story but i thought that the last two chapters seemed a bit rushed.

charlotte

This story was fucking awesome and I loved it!

Loved it!

Hey, sorry, having trouble logging in, but that's my name on here. :)

Okay, anyways, I am in love with this story! Def. can't wait to read the other one. I'm sad this one had to end but I'm happy you continued.

Great story one of my top favorites. Glad I found it.

goodness, i truly loved this story!

it couldn't have been any better than i expected it to be :) I am officially obsessed with Italians.. and older brothers. Coincidentally, I've been reading so many stories with like.. mafia people & italians lately tha I'm HOOKED LOL! Love it loved it. Planning on reading another one of yours ) THANKS FOR THE GREAT STORY.

Wow, you have a thing for odd nicknames...

This was an extremely good story, couldn't stop reading it :] Good job, i look forward to reading the sequal

Hey! I just discovered this story and I really enjoy your writing style. It's refreshing to read good grammar, spelling and writing where everything flows very nicely.

Great job! Happy writing!

~Jenny

WTF?

XD

Damn. This story was amazing. I loved it so much. I've finally signed in online. I read it all offline.

Ahh. There were so many times I wanted to comment man.

I love how you've put the Parker family on this high pedestal. What with the Ps, the hot brothers and the cool main character, the sister.

I actually liked Tyler and Kevin the most. Of course, Jake was amazing. A story of Jake sounds like it would be cool though. He was the one left behind to take care of his siblings with that crazy dad over them so I believe his story will be nice.

I'm glad you wrote about him. I can't wait to go read that. I kind of figured that the titles were songs.

By the way, that last line was totally amazing.

“She’s a Parker of course.”

Damn. I feel like they're celebrities or something. I was thinking that I wanted to meet them or be in their family.

But wait, they don't exist. Aww.

Yes, BRING ON JAKE PARKER! YEAH, BABY, YEAH!

Okay, maybe I went too far.

Haha. This was awesome. I am going to favourite it.

Hey, I've been really hooked on your story and have been reading it non-stop for like 2 days now. I'm up to this chapter (duh, obviously), but there's nothing here! I don't want to rush ahead because when I glanced at the next chapter, this one seemed really important and I'd hate to miss crucial info! Plus (as a quick side-note), you said in chap 22's AN, that this story was gonna end with chap 27 right? I'm just wondering why you didn't change it to completed? I'm sorry, if this is answered later on, I just don't wanna spoil anything for myself, because I'm really enjoying reading this! It's a great, well thought out story, with incredibly real and strong characters. I love it. I know it's been years since you've probably looked at this, but I'd love to get a chance to finish it! So if it's possible, could you put in the missing chapter? If you can't (for whatever reason), an email would be greatly appreciated, so I don't get my hopes up. Thanks again. Hope to hear from you soon. )

That was an amazing prologue... I don't even know what made it so amazing... but it was. Ginormous props to you. Most people's prologues are like a lamer (is that a word?) chapter one, but yours was amazing. I think I'll just say it one more time. It was amazing.

Fantastic story. It was really fun to read. I must say that Jake was my favorite ahaha. Well done!