update soon! one word of preference, stop using swears. i kinda hate reading with those offensive words ringin in my ears *grins sheepishly*

I love it! You really should write more, it's a very good idea.

*VelvetNightSky*

Ooh, this is neat. I like it. ] Very intrigueing! Is Jason the "secret admirer"? I bet he is!

Haha. That's one screwed up family. Don't get me wrong, a very COOL family, but being raised by teenage boys has got to mess up a girl just a bit. Hehe, update soon!

I really like this story! It's certainly different, but in a good way! :-) I like it...update soon. There's just one thing I have to say:

You don't accept anonymous reviews. You can get more reviews by accepting them, because more than registered memebers can review your stories. I'm really sure people wanted to review your work, because I really liked this, and I'm sure other people who aren't members would love to review this story.

To change the anonymous reviews thing, when you login, go to the column on the left side. There is a link called "Account Settings", click that and there will be a check-box by the phrase, "Don't accept anonymous reviews". And of course, uncheck the box. :-D

Good job on this again. It was very good. :-)

i like it! can't wait to see the next chap!

hey gurl...that was a very good stories...just post more...so loving it...getting very good so far...

this is really good!you have to update!

I like this story so far. It's kinda funny. Update soon.

I like it! Sounds intresting! Keep on going!

Interesting. I like.

Hey! This is a great story so far! I hope you update soon!

cool! nice beginning! update soon, ok!

this story is cool so far. write more, i'll read it. interesting; i'm curious as to what her life is like, with 5 older brothers and no parents. keep writing!