Reviews for The Parker Chronicles: Melissa's Story |
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![]() ![]() ![]() i love chris in this chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i hate how unreasonable chris is being. why isn't he off telling Jason instead of laying it all on melissa? i mean she's not even acting like a slut or anything - damn |
![]() ![]() ![]() Liking the story so far! It's real cool! I hate the fact that that i don't have time to finish reading this tonight- but I will definitely be back! NR |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hehe...love that motto |
![]() ![]() I just have to give you major props on your story. It was really, really good. A little hard to understand at first but about mid-story it got really good and I really thought it was a good story that was also really well written. Keep Writing! Wallaceout |
![]() ![]() ![]() amazing story. that's all I have to say. |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOVED THIS! Its rocked. Sophie x |
![]() ![]() ![]() sounds interesting :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww, tre cute. |
![]() ![]() loved it!Liss n Jason were so cute!n i totally loved Jake!yeah!go Jake sequel! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was really good. It may have been 'another cliche' but you added an original flair and unique personality to it. Great Job. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love how you make (kinda) half of it in Italian. It's really unique and makes your characters seem more real. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Finally! Chris is a good guy now, right? I hope so... [gosh, I feel like such a dork...] :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw, thats adorable. But I bet Chris finds them and flips out. :p |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw, that's so sad. :( |