Reviews for Eyes Of The Beholder
PhanLass chapter 1 . 6/2/2005
Wow, I liked it alot. You have a knack for detailing and keeping the story going. My creative writing Professor, who has had a couple of her works published, would be impressed I think. Great job.
written-in-green-highlighter chapter 1 . 6/1/2005
sry i couldn't read it all but it's a good start...i like ur other story... in the name of love i think.*never stop writing*
zagato chapter 3 . 5/30/2005
This is wonderful. I like your story a lot. Please update.
Jelli-baby chapter 3 . 5/29/2005
Wow, this story keeps on getting better! I can't wait until you write more. Drop me a line if you want, my email's above. Luv J-b x
Jelli-baby chapter 2 . 5/29/2005
Ooh, it reminds me of Beauty and the Beast! I love that film. A few spelling errors but in general I really like this chapter. Just one question... what colour is your hair? I just ask, because I know from experience that very few writers create red-headed characters unless they have red hair themselves! And I know, because I do! So I immediately have a huge soft spot for Chastine. Love the chap, keep writingLuv J-b x
Jelli-baby chapter 1 . 5/29/2005
Hey! This story really appeals to me! You have a lot of talent and I can see this story really going somewhere! One thing I had to mention, though...sorry to be a nit-picker but I can't help it... the word "it's" is used for "it is" and the word "its" for "belonging to it". You got the two confused somewhat at the start of the chapter. But I can tell you are a talented writer and that I am going to enjoy this story. I like the depth of the characters already. Keep on writing!Luv Jelli-baby x