Reviews for No More
Haunted-dreams05 chapter 1 . 6/26/2005
This poem was very well written and I can relate and understand so well. I can feel the hurt and the pain behind these words. Great poem/song and yet very depressing as well.
silverquill212 chapter 1 . 6/25/2005
Strong and emotional. A realistically-narrated outcry that pulls on the heartstrings of the reader.

I liked how you made a sort of chorus and repeated it after every stanza; I have done the same in a few of my poems. Particularly powerful were the first three lines ("No more / No more / I cannot take this anymore"), "Can’t you see / My shattered eyes", and the phrase "murderous word."

Thanks for the review.
putz-6 chapter 1 . 6/2/2005
This is an awsome song _
queenvixta chapter 1 . 5/29/2005
Amazing again, I can really relate! You're definetly going on my fave authors...if you aren't already! Keep writing! QueenVixta
Sorrowful Dreams chapter 1 . 5/28/2005
this is strong and touching. It has so much pain..but yet emotional and I just loved it.