Reviews for Shackled
Whisper on the Lips chapter 1 . 7/17/2005
Well written ..i like the metaphores. FaCINating, no i don't think i remember you. but your poetry is quite lovely. i bow to you, another respected scholar in this madened world, with only poetry to speak. wow that sounded cool. WRITE ON! (
HarleyQuin chapter 1 . 7/15/2005
liked it. very dramatic. and you're right depressing...actually dark would be a better adj. . you should read my poem "Memoirs of a Masochist". it's right up your alley and probably my best poem. you have a lot of poems but maybe i can tackle a majority.
HauntedMisery chapter 1 . 5/30/2005
I love this, you are going on my favorite authors list, awesome work!
WiltingBlackRose chapter 1 . 5/29/2005
Short, but really good. I seriously don't think you've written anything I don't like yet.
Unholy Haven chapter 1 . 5/28/2005
I like the stucture and formatting of this poem, and your use of repetition at the end. Very good!