Reviews for so jealous
candyratt chapter 1 . 8/20/2005
You know where else this belongs?- in my favorites.;)
EmbersAblaze-IgnitedIcicle chapter 1 . 6/5/2005
first line and last line are perfect "bookends" to yout prose.
pneumothorax chapter 1 . 6/4/2005
This shouldn't be in the poems section. First line's a killer. It's awesome, but not best of all your writing.
Phat Models chapter 1 . 5/28/2005
This should be in the poems section...but its good