I like how you start it with the poem. I also like how it's kind of mysterious; it makes you want to keep reading to find out what it's talking about.

Hehe poor jade. Killing is fun... I mean bad. *hides knife behind back*

wow, this is awesome! you finally posted a new chapter. but is jade gonna have to kill tally's familiar? cause hes a hell demon too. and hows the gonna fill the crack. hm. i cant wait to see how this turns out! keep writing

lol, well hurry up I want to get to the ending. :D

This seems very interesting, though I should start with the first book.

Good Job! *_*

I WANNA KNOW CHRIS' PAST NOW! Okay I'm fine for now but I seriously want to know. And when you get the time theres a few more chapters on Sylark but that's only when you get the time kay? TTFN

Snowfeather

wow, this is a really good chapter! i wonder what chris's past is...

You know I'm reading if you keep writing!

Snowfeather

wow this is a good start. ive been waiting for the start of this book for a while. i hope its as good or better than the last. what am i saying? of course it will!