Reviews for Whisper in the moonlight shower
NumblesTheAuthor chapter 1 . 7/31/2005
damn...that was good lol...i mean, really excellent imagery, and um, thanks for the review. :)
Lellida chapter 1 . 7/11/2005
Lovely poem, especially the beginning about the moonlight shower. Pretty imagery, and I love the questions raised in the last stanza. However, I feel wierd now because this poem was inspired by a toilet. ;)
kashe chapter 1 . 6/1/2005
its a good and nice poem for being thought up on the
The Juggler 42 chapter 1 . 5/29/2005
Good question. Just wanted to say, the meter works really well in the first stanza. Nailed ABAB for that one verse, and the rhythm works well, except maybe for the forth line. The rest of the poem is really close to matching, but the rhythm for most of it doesn't quite work as well as the first three lines. I think if you nudge that into place this could be title too. :-D

-The Juggler
Bittersweetwriting chapter 1 . 5/29/2005
wow, great imagery! one of the best poems I've read in a while!