Reviews for The Moon On Snow
Adrenalin chapter 1 . 12/20/2009
I loved this story. It had all the feelings of a fairy tale, short and to the point. I liked the way you used the Queen's wishes and made the fairies twist them into a curse. It reminded me of Ella Enchanted and its foolish fairy.

Your style is very good and flows well, so agreeable to read...

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Amarantis chapter 1 . 9/20/2008
In my opinion this is a high quality story. It had this kind of fairy tail element in it, which I liked.
dangerouslies chapter 1 . 4/27/2008
Hi,

I like this story, it's like a fairy-tale gone slightly wrong. I especially like the ending sentence, because it's in keeping with that theme.

There really isn't much to complain about but you accidentally started a new paragraph when you went into brackets in the instance and I felt that you didn't need to use the brackets the second time with a bit of rephrasing. You also switched from the past tense to the present in the last part of this story and you used 'says' and 'said' a little too frequently. There are a lot of other ways to express the fact that someone is talking.

But apart from those minor things, I really enjoyed reading this.

dangerouslies, a fellow member of Reviewers Kingdom
Medieval Fantasy Freak chapter 1 . 5/30/2005
Very interesting.
Sarah-Brighteyes chapter 1 . 5/29/2005
I absolutely loved this piece. Amazing story weaved in this poem. the fairy tale of a love for everyone and the misfit of fairies wishes lured me right into it. Probably one of my favorite poems I have read tonight. bravo to you *smile*