Hey I love it so far please write more.

hey have you considered haveing a BETA review your work. Its a good story and i can see that it will be great when its done but there are many type-o's, though you did say that there would be, haha, well good luck! keep trying!

Whoa, that was unexpected. No wonder you kept telling me I had to read all this. And about your writing getting better, I really think it is. Practice makes perfect, and all that. But I also think you're being too hard on yourself! Stop saying it's not very good. Anyway, cool chapter. And now that I've read more you can't yell at me before Social tomorrow.

Yup, definitely some new stuff in there that I haven't read. And that chapter is still pretty shocking. It's like whoa, where did that come from. Shocking, yo.

Yarr. So this is a chapter I already read, but whatever. I needed the reminder. Plus, I'm sure it was revised. Like the texting conversation, I KNOW that wasn't there before. I like it. But you already knew that. But still, there are just little bits here and there that I can picture so perfectly, and I'm all "yup, that's highschool". Nicely done, I s' , I KNOW WHAT'S COMING NEXT! Ack, the excitement...though I shall be sleeping now. Chapters 3 and 4 tomorrow night, then.

Ayahaha! So, yeah, I didn't really read it here, since I've already read it about 5 billion times. Anyway, I was going to tell you to hurry up and post chapter two, 'cept then I remembered I'm the reason it's not up...Oh well. You'll get it tonight, I PROMISE. Let me die a thousand horrible deaths if yuo don't get it on this very DAY. And then you can post it, and all will be well! Bye then!